A poem. by NewVoltdrive July 13, 2014 at 8:07 PM UTC

We as humans, have evolved with time.
But we have forgotten what makes us shine.
We have made a system to keep us aligned.
But all we are doing is keeping us confined.
For our spirits can no longer be free.
And our needs are what they shouldn't be.
We yearn for safety, but is it too much?
When it is almost crime to touch.
We cage those who kill and steal.
But their crimes can not be real.
For we have created them in our mind.
And they no longer want to be confined.
We scorn those who are filled with hatred.
But we stop ourselves from doing what is human nature.

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Mooch24 July 13, 2014 at 8:07 PM UTC

10/10
Really good :D

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Ingigo July 13, 2014 at 8:07 PM UTC

Nice Poem! Great English Techniques all over! Well Done!

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Dawudis July 13, 2014 at 11:07 PM UTC

This Is Great!!!

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