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[GAME] A poem to a friend. by IviFetita December 18, 2014 at 1:12 AM UTC

Hello there!
Here is a new Forum Minigame called A poem to a friend.
It is pretty easy;
You have to write a poem to a friend, to your best friend.
It's steps are first think about your best friend, someone who you love with your heart and would give anything for his/her safety, or a really good friend. Think in what he/she makes you happy, why is your friend, why he/she makes you feel special, etc.

I'll give mine as example.
Mine: 
"I know I say it and repeat it everytime, but I never can stop feeling very glad for have you as friend: Thank you for be my friend. Thank you for understand me everytime. Basically, you are the reason of why I'm alive, otherwise, I surely won't be alive. You are what makes me happy, what makes me wake up each morning, and go to sleep each night. You are the reason of why now I'm being happy, and why I feel I'm special only with you. You occupied a very special place in my heart, and if you'd stop being my friend, my life would stop having sense. the best part of all is that everything I wrote is truth, and I wrote it with my heart. I love you, friend. Promise me you will never stop being my friend, because  you are who helps me and supports me in the downs and the ups." - I don't feel very comfortable publicly saying to who I wrote this poem, but if you want to know, feel free to ask.

P.S.: 
Please note that you can if you want tell to who was directed the poem tell us, otherwise it isn't necessary. Thank you. :)
Please, do not spam. I'm talking seriously, don't make any spammy post here. :)

Zedther December 18, 2014 at 1:12 AM UTC

Roses are red..
Violets are blue..
Poetry Stinks
And so do yo- wait one second

BoldAndBrash December 18, 2014 at 2:12 AM UTC

Youre face is weird

but still really cool

I must confess you use to be the feared

but youre still cool zed

Pavlo December 18, 2014 at 3:12 AM UTC

Roses are red, 
violets are blue, 
in Soviet Russia, 
Poem writes you. 

Roses are red, 
Violets are blue, 
When you open up photoshop, 
And mess with the hue

Coco_stag December 18, 2014 at 3:12 AM UTC

i was so mean
you could all see
but now i changed
i will never rage xD

chaibrit1 December 18, 2014 at 3:12 AM UTC

too many clichés

Glitchaye December 18, 2014 at 3:12 AM UTC

The poem in the OP is essentially what I had in mind for a few people.

ImJeezus December 18, 2014 at 4:12 AM UTC

Roses are red
Violets arn't blue
You're cute
Can I film a porno with you?

MasterProX December 18, 2014 at 4:12 AM UTC

I'm better with music than I am with words.

FrostedCupcakez December 18, 2014 at 7:12 AM UTC

Do I have to write one... Or can I find one...? Too late! I found one:

When I'm with you,
eternity is a step away,
my love continues to grow,
with each passing day.

This treasure of love,
I cherish within my soul,
how much I love you...
you'll never really know.

You bring a joy to my heart,
I've never felt before,
with each touch of your hand,
I love you more and more.

Whenever we say goodbye,
whenever we part,
know I hold you dearly,
deep inside my heart.

So these seven words,
I pray you hold true,
"Forever And Always,
I Will Love You."

- Chris Engle -


I'm weird like that :')

FightToWin7431 December 18, 2014 at 10:12 AM UTC

You wrote that???? :O

IviFetita December 18, 2014 at 1:12 PM UTC

Do I have to write one... Or can I find one...? Too late! I found one:

When I'm with you,
eternity is a step away,
my love continues to grow,
with each passing day.

This treasure of love,
I cherish within my soul,
how much I love you...
you'll never really know.

You bring a joy to my heart,
I've never felt before,
with each touch of your hand,
I love you more and more.

Whenever we say goodbye,
whenever we part,
know I hold you dearly,
deep inside my heart.

So these seven words,
I pray you hold true,
"Forever And Always,
I Will Love You."

- Chris Engle -


I'm weird like that :')
Yes, you had to write it.
But it is okay... :)

Jerseys December 18, 2014 at 1:12 PM UTC

Do I have to write one... Or can I find one...? Too late! I found one:

When I'm with you,
eternity is a step away,
my love continues to grow,
with each passing day.

This treasure of love,
I cherish within my soul,
how much I love you...
you'll never really know.

You bring a joy to my heart,
I've never felt before,
with each touch of your hand,
I love you more and more.

Whenever we say goodbye,
whenever we part,
know I hold you dearly,
deep inside my heart.

So these seven words,
I pray you hold true,
"Forever And Always,
I Will Love You."

- Chris Engle -


I'm weird like that :')
That's about me, isn't?

ProfessorUtonium December 18, 2014 at 2:12 PM UTC

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
You think am cool 
Or I stick you in glue

IviFetita December 18, 2014 at 2:12 PM UTC

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
You think am cool 
Or I stick you in glue
Lol. That really came from the more deep place of your heart... :/

Myv December 18, 2014 at 7:12 PM UTC

ivi ur poem iz about me right!1!111!1111!!!

lel jks

_Phyre December 18, 2014 at 7:12 PM UTC

FaZe Night  by: John Smith JF.


My mum
My dad
My crumy crumy tum

Always in Faze clan for you and my heart
For already know, Optic has won
Eternity past, and we're already gone.

For far away, this 1v1 shall live
In cold hard night, which our shall give
Through darkness, through night, Faze clan
UNITE!

_Phyre December 18, 2014 at 7:12 PM UTC

Optic Delight by: John Smith Legacy JF.

Mmmmmm hmmm hmmmmmm
 Our soul... From the mountain we belong
 From the kingdom of the song
 We all have won

 FaZe is Cheeky
 When 1v1's Still reeking.
 We all have done

 Far Away, On a PS4
 In a cabin of our store
 A team of quickscopers
 Running within

 For what we have seen, and what has been
 We are Optic
 We are life

StewieFG December 19, 2014 at 6:12 PM UTC

Roses are red
violents are blue
stop writing poems
or I shoot u in the head like ducksfanwaterloo

IviFetita December 19, 2014 at 6:12 PM UTC

Roses are red
violents are blue
stop writing poems
or I shoot u in the head like ducksfanwaterloo
Nuuu please don't favourite panda!!! :c
"Pandas are decent,
 but there's only one,
 that when I'm with him
I feel special.

There're much animals
But not  enough love
to give to Eric,
who is who I love
."

Sem December 19, 2014 at 7:12 PM UTC

Nuuu please don't favourite panda!!! :c
"Pandas are decent,
 but there's only one,
 that when I'm with him
I feel special.

There're much animals
But not  enough love
to give to Eric,
who is who I love
."
DEEEEP

IviFetita December 19, 2014 at 7:12 PM UTC

DEEEEP
HIGH!!! :C
I haven't much imagination to imagine a good poem :/

StickilasFanboy December 20, 2014 at 2:12 AM UTC

Its ok there is a snake heaven
We know that cancer is a bitch
So I hope you make it through this 
Just remember I will always support you

(Doesnt rhyme cause I cant)

sackboy_lbp December 20, 2014 at 2:12 AM UTC

I fell off a tree and broke my knee.
I slipped down the stairs and ripped off my hair.
I hit my door and fell through the floor.
I played with my toys and died of joy.

I rolled off my bed and cracked my head.
I tripped on some yarn and shattered my arm.
I sprayed a power house and bloodied my nose.
I stumbled in the hall and landed on the saw.

As you can tell, my day wasn't so great.
So pay me your respect, and try not to hate.

_Phyre December 20, 2014 at 4:12 AM UTC

Shooting Star by: Owl City

Close your tired eyes, relaxing them.
Count from 1 to 10 and open them.
All these heavy thoughts will try to weigh you down, but not this time.

Way up in the air, you're finally free, and you can stay up there, right next to me.
All this gravity will try to pull you down, but not this time.

When the sun goes down, and the lights burn out,
Then it's time for you to shine.
Brighter than the shooting star, so shine no matter where you are.
Fill the darkest night, with a brilliant light,
'cause it's time for you to shine.
Brighter than a shooting star, so shine no matter where you are, tonight.

Wooh, wooh, wooh.
Brighter than a shooting star,
Shine no matter where you are, tonight.

Gazing through my eyes, when the fire starts,
And fan the flame so hot, it melt our hearts.
All the pouring rain, will try to put it out, but not this time.

Let your colours burn, and brightly burst, into a million sparks, but all dispursed and illuminate a world,
That'll try to bring you down,
But not this time.

When the sun goes down, and the lights burn out,
Then it's time for you to shine.
Brighter than the shooting star, so shine no matter where you are.
Fill the darkest night, with a brilliant light,
'cause it's time for you to shine.
Brighter than a shooting star, so shine no matter where you are, tonight.

Wooh, wooh, wooh.
Brighter than a shooting star,
Shine no matter where you are, tonight.

A thousand heartbeats beating time, and makes this dark planet come alive. So when the lights flicker out tonight, you gotta shine.

When the sun goes down, and the lights burn out,
Then it's time for you to shine.
Brighter than the shooting star, so shine no matter where you are.
Fill the darkest night, with a brilliant light,
'cause it's time for you to shine.
Brighter than a shooting star, so shine no matter where you are, tonight.

Wooh, wooh, wooh.
Brighter than a shooting star,
Shine no matter where you are, tonight.

 
I dont know, I tought of this as an inspiring song so i decided to share it with you guys <3 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K7KMRBoqQUg
Yes I know this is not a poem, but songs are really Free Verse :P

FrostedCupcakez December 20, 2014 at 7:12 AM UTC

That's about me, isn't?
You wish.

chaibrit1 December 20, 2014 at 7:12 AM UTC

Can we do free verse poetry too?

IviFetita December 26, 2014 at 12:12 AM UTC

Can we do free verse poetry too?
Of Course!
It is free verse :P You only have to write something that means much to that person that when you are with him/her does you feel special <3
EDIT: Sorry for the bump xP

Stimulating December 26, 2014 at 4:12 AM UTC

The final moment, 
a last whisper echoing through the field, 
where my life ended, 
and truly started, 
I feel lost as ever, 
but somehow found in the same, 
for all I have done, 
I am truly ashamed. 

Now I stand here, 
bearing the weight of my actions, 
hoping it all not turn to only a fraction 

-Me (I got inspired :P)

mustafa December 26, 2014 at 1:12 PM UTC

MY POEM:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue
I have a gun,
Get in the van

Milki December 26, 2014 at 2:12 PM UTC

You wrote that???? :O
Composed by ZUN, the company that made the game Touhou. Gotta love Touhou music <3