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Some writing for you all! by Stimulating September 25, 2014 at 12:09 AM UTC

I went full writer mode and made this: 

"The chocolates sweet, only her gentle embrace sweeter, as we stared up, the sky replaced by a canvas, us both lost in it's beauty as reality slowly beckoned us back to earth. We both never knew silence could be so beautiful, as the night slowly faded into orange" 

For your entertainment, 

-ShadowSlayerZ7

Dyspa September 25, 2014 at 12:09 AM UTC

What was the chocolate's flavour?

OPTOBAT September 25, 2014 at 1:09 AM UTC

that's absolutely amazing imagery man.. honestly, i enjoy English, and I've never seen something like this described in a way like this. You should consider adding this to a poem or story and submitting it SOMEWHERE, nice job again :)

Stimulating September 25, 2014 at 1:09 AM UTC

that's absolutely amazing imagery man.. honestly, i enjoy English, and I've never seen something like this described in a way like this. You should consider adding this to a poem or story and submitting it SOMEWHERE, nice job again :)
Thanks man! I personally have photo thought and memory so I guess that helps :P. I like writing every once in a while and are looking at it as a possible profession so this helps a lot with gauge where I'm at in terms of writing. I'm currently in Gr. 9 and having fun with Highschool.

Stimulating September 25, 2014 at 1:09 AM UTC

What was the chocolate's flavour?
Chocolate-Orange I guess :P or Belgian. Lol now I'm hungry

Dyspa September 25, 2014 at 2:09 AM UTC

Chocolate-Orange I guess :P or Belgian. Lol now I'm hungry
Same.
xD

FirstSintax September 25, 2014 at 2:09 AM UTC

Perfect! is this describing a marriage?

http://avicus.net/forums/79bd5d55e

Stimulating September 25, 2014 at 4:09 AM UTC

Perfect! is this describing a marriage?

http://avicus.net/forums/79bd5d55e
I'm a bit too young for that but you could certainly rip it off me to ask someone xD.