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My Horror Story! by Dawudis July 13, 2014 at 1:07 PM UTC

Hey Avicus Brethren.. lol that sounded weird.
Anyway, I made a Horror Story because I had nothing else to do, and I am going to let everyone read it. Hope you guys enjoy!

And it is also pretty long...


The Printer   I looked at the clock wearily on the top of the wall. I was still typing up my report for history class, and didn’t realize that it was already 2:00 AM. I rubbed my face and tried my best to stay awake.    Much later, I had finally pressed the last key which meant I finished my report. A small moment of rejoice had blossomed in my tired body. I packed up my books and printed the history paper.   For some reason the printer wasn’t working though. I saw the wire stuck in the small socket. I checked if the switch was on, which it was, hence it should be working. I shook the printer and started hitting it. “Why won’t it work, I need some sleep” I screamed in my head. It felt like the cat caught my tongue, silence was stopping my mouth from actually speaking at all. I was just too tired.   I quickly jumped up on my bed and buried my face into the pillow, trying to forget about the paper. I slept for about an hour, until I heard a disturbing glitch noise coming from the printer.   I awoke shocked and fixated that the printer was making sound. I walked over to the printer and saw that papers were printing. There was one continuous message that kept printing out. “Check your window” it said. Even though I was really sleepy, that specific message made me feel like I was being watched. I quickly walked to my window to see a tall distorted brute standing at nine feet tall, just staring at me from a certain distance.   I quickly took out my phone and called 9-1-1. They eventually came and looked outside of the window to see if the creature was there. But as usual, the creature disappeared, when the police came.   So as always, they didn’t believe me and told me to get some rest. Now I know what you might be thinking, why didn’t I show them the papers?   If they didn’t believe me when I told them about the creature, they would never believe me about the message on the paper, they would immediately mark me as crazy.           As time passed I tried to clear my head from this madness. That’s when I remembered about my history paper. So I went to my computer and re-printed the report, and this time it actually worked. I tromped to the printer and was about to take the report, until I received a sudden phone call. It was from my neighbor, he had said that someone with a withstanding height is opening your door.  I hung up the phone, and tried to tell myself this was just a dream.         At that exact moment, I heard my front door creak open, and also heard the printer make that infuriating glitch noise. I saw that another paper printed right after my history report.           The paper showed a picture of a mutilated and slaughtered body lying on what appeared to be my bed. Under the abhorrent picture, there was a message. It said in a very clear font, “This is what you will look like when it is done with you”. Again, at that exact moment, I heard footsteps coming up the stairs, headed for my room

MajestysDream July 13, 2014 at 1:07 PM UTC

Jesus! This is so amazing! Great job! I love it! I would love to read the end! :D

Ingigo July 13, 2014 at 2:07 PM UTC

Great Story! Has all the elements of a great story in it! Grammar seems good, spelling as well! Just compete the story and use some more descriptive devices and it will make the story so much better. Or you could just end it at that, the way you put that cliffhanger was superb!

AndrewJKim July 13, 2014 at 2:07 PM UTC

Thats the ending. I shall end it.
The boy then dies. The End.
Kk, scared me cuz before i read this, my dad was printing stuff and i was on my bed when i read this. :/

mr_penguin_12 July 13, 2014 at 3:07 PM UTC

Wow your good!  You made my heart race at the climax.....

Dawudis July 13, 2014 at 3:07 PM UTC

Thank you all for the kind comments! I will do some more horror stories and post them to the forums!

Beautifulistic July 13, 2014 at 3:07 PM UTC

Wow, amazing bro! Everything's perfect. I really want to hear the ending, but I want to hear more the most! I got a lil' creeped out though :P

Dawudis July 13, 2014 at 4:07 PM UTC

lol, I keep it as a cliff hanger at the end. I think the end should be in the readers thought instead :)

UnicornSniper July 13, 2014 at 4:07 PM UTC

This is one of mah favorite Ender!  I hope you post the others those are good too!!!

You should rename this to the CreepyAvicusPasta, the CAP thread (^_^)v  People could come up with their own creepy story, even use some of the avicus players as characters in his/her story (^_^)v

ParthDarthVader July 13, 2014 at 5:07 PM UTC

No come on please make the ending. I can't lee ally think of anything...

Dawudis July 13, 2014 at 5:07 PM UTC

Sorry bro

Dawudis July 13, 2014 at 5:07 PM UTC

its supposed to be like that

Klondichael July 13, 2014 at 8:07 PM UTC

I r scared

MissCarmel July 13, 2014 at 8:07 PM UTC

Did you try turning the printer off and on?

SWEET_Johny July 13, 2014 at 8:07 PM UTC

Excuse me while I drive to Albertsons to buy a night-light.

Cezbla July 13, 2014 at 8:07 PM UTC

Finish the story please

UnicornSniper July 13, 2014 at 9:07 PM UTC

Did you try turning the printer off and on?
xD

UnicornSniper July 13, 2014 at 9:07 PM UTC

Finish the story please
o_o!  Excuse me while I go toss my printer outside o_o

ParthDarthVader July 13, 2014 at 10:07 PM UTC

Must......read.....ending.....

or or I send you stuff through your printer and slice and dice you up like the tomatoes that I'm about to have....

MissCarmel July 13, 2014 at 10:07 PM UTC

xD
Finally somebody got the joke XD

SpicyTunaRoll9 July 13, 2014 at 11:07 PM UTC

I love the cliffhanger. +1.

Dawudis July 13, 2014 at 11:07 PM UTC

Thanks Spicy!
And Please No Ravi!!!!

ParthDarthVader July 14, 2014 at 1:07 AM UTC

Thanks Spicy!
And Please No Ravi!!!!
had the tomatoes already....
but be ready for some of the potatoes....that im going to have like....next week :P

Dawudis July 14, 2014 at 1:07 AM UTC

XD!!!!!!!

Eklip_Z July 14, 2014 at 2:07 AM UTC

Amazing story! It kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time.

Dawudis July 14, 2014 at 5:07 PM UTC

Dank You!!!

StewieFG July 15, 2014 at 5:07 PM UTC

ma gawd ur so epic dude......OMG :D

Dawudis July 15, 2014 at 9:07 PM UTC

:)

Dawudis July 15, 2014 at 9:07 PM UTC

ma gawd ur so epic dude......OMG :D
:)

UnicornSniper July 16, 2014 at 12:07 AM UTC

Post up another story Ender!  You're good at this!!! (^_^)v

goldenwalrus909 July 16, 2014 at 3:07 AM UTC

I personally really like the ending because you can make up what happens next :D
But seriously, this story is amazing. Like, I'm actually really scared right now just from reading this. You're an amazing writer with some amazing ideas. Thanks so much for the story and good luck on the next ones I (hope) you make! :D

Kammeh July 16, 2014 at 4:07 AM UTC

Look out your window.... you hear a crack and a knock on your door...and it creaks open. 

Have fun with nightmares. xD