The Excalibur Saga by Zaayk November 3, 2014 at 12:11 AM UTC
The Excalibur Saga is back! As some of you know, it was the first fan-fiction Avicus ever had!Anyway, here's a short summary of what you'll be reading:
There are two regions, Blue and Red, fighting for a mythical and all mighty emerald sword named "Excalibur". The only way to get the sword, because it is frozen in place in the middle of the "Field of Wood" (the field that separates the two regions) is to destroy the other side's energy source, a heavily guarded and highly powerful piece of obsidian. It's an action/comedy story that follows me and a bunch of old/current/new Avicus players! It is loosely based of Nebula DTM.
Anyway, why am I keeping you waiting? Go ahead and start reading. I'm going to release a couple each week. Oh, and if you like the story, please tell your friends about it, I'm trying to get more attention towards it so more people can enjoy it. :D
Season 1
Episode 1: http://pastebin.com/iBVj0azS
Episode 2: http://pastebin.com/1s5pr2Ed
Episode 3: http://pastebin.com/63xiSN2J
Episode 4: http://pastebin.com/EQ4jQrwk
Episode 5: http://pastebin.com/jzECMcQj
Episode 6: http://pastebin.com/9MHkyKYL
Episode 7: http://pastebin.com/tbYARChk
Episode 8: http://pastebin.com/038CvyLa
Episode 9: http://pastebin.com/axqqC4Ef
Episode 10: http://pastebin.com/f90SsALD
Season 2
Episode 1: http://pastebin.com/uZqE4x16
Episode 2: http://pastebin.com/2mtVHfWs
Episode 3: http://pastebin.com/xqgssRRq
Episode 4: http://pastebin.com/3tbv9ECm
Episode 5: http://pastebin.com/68WzHqZr
Episode 6: http://pastebin.com/tcL31GxJ
Episode 7: http://pastebin.com/1NXVV0eK
cinammoncroc000 November 3, 2014 at 12:11 AM UTC
Wow, awesome! I really like the plot so far, and I can't wait for the release of the remaining episodes. ;Dgaboelmejor November 3, 2014 at 2:11 AM UTC
This is Sword Art Online with little tweaks xDProfessorUtonium November 3, 2014 at 2:11 AM UTC
It's Amazing. Will I be in it :Pkycrafft November 3, 2014 at 2:11 AM UTC
This is Sword Art Online with little tweaks xD
alexanderjoe November 3, 2014 at 3:11 AM UTC
I remember my amazing powers.Zaayk November 3, 2014 at 11:11 AM UTC
Episode 2 is out!cinammoncroc000 November 3, 2014 at 4:11 PM UTC
"Zach equips his diamond sword, Dragonair."
Nice story so far! ;D
jojobloblo November 3, 2014 at 4:11 PM UTC
Noice :3Zaayk November 4, 2014 at 12:11 PM UTC
"Zach equips his diamond sword, Dragonair."
Nice story so far! ;D
I did NOT know that was a Pokemon. :P Well, anyway, Episode 3 is out.
cinammoncroc000 November 4, 2014 at 1:11 PM UTC
Nice twist!My only suggestion (though I don't think you can change it since these have already been written) is to add more descriptive details about the environments around them. The dialogue is great, but I find it hard to visualize their surroundings, which makes the story less compelling and engaging.
However, I'm really liking the plot so far and I'm looking forward to more ;)
VinnyDaPooh November 4, 2014 at 10:11 PM UTC
ASHUM!!! Make more bruh! :DZaayk November 4, 2014 at 10:11 PM UTC
Nice twist!
My only suggestion (though I don't think you can change it since these have already been written) is to add more descriptive details about the environments around them. The dialogue is great, but I find it hard to visualize their surroundings, which makes the story less compelling and engaging.
However, I'm really liking the plot so far and I'm looking forward to more ;)
Episode 4 is out! :D
ProfessorUtonium November 4, 2014 at 10:11 PM UTC
Blackbox? Should've made it Y-BoxZaayk November 8, 2014 at 4:11 PM UTC
Blackbox? Should've made it Y-Box
Episode 5 is out!
ProfessorUtonium November 8, 2014 at 4:11 PM UTC
Oh I didn't read it correctly then :Pkycrafft November 8, 2014 at 4:11 PM UTC
Never failing to make a good story :Drememes November 8, 2014 at 6:11 PM UTC
ooo episode 5 made me rly wanna read 6 :DDDMyv November 8, 2014 at 6:11 PM UTC
It's actually "Block-Box" :P
Episode 5 is out!
lockkk
MidnightBeats November 8, 2014 at 8:11 PM UTC
bump4dayz much
lockkk
Refrain from doing this any longer otherwise you will recieve a punishment.
MLGtino November 8, 2014 at 9:11 PM UTC
ProfessorUtonium November 8, 2014 at 9:11 PM UTC
Zaayk November 10, 2014 at 12:11 AM UTC
I'm being nice today and releasing 6... AND 7! :OVinnyDaPooh November 10, 2014 at 1:11 AM UTC
YASSSSSS, episode 7 is such a cliff hanger! I NEED MORE!cinammoncroc000 November 10, 2014 at 1:11 PM UTC
I love the comedic value you've put into it so far. Overall, nice job! ;)Zaayk November 11, 2014 at 2:11 AM UTC
Ok, so since Episode 8 is really short... I'm releasing Episode 9 today too! Super-long action packed episode with a massive, mid-sentence cutoff cliffhanger.You know what that means... Tommorow is the Season 1 finale! :D
OPTOBAT November 11, 2014 at 10:11 AM UTC
this is truly one of the most unique and creative things on Avicus I've ever seen.This is totally mind blowing and amazing man, and i hope to see a second season :D
Keep up the amazing work and this may have inspired me to make my own Avicus story ;)
Zaayk November 11, 2014 at 12:11 PM UTC
It's Amazing. Will I be in it :P
Storm997 November 11, 2014 at 12:11 PM UTC
How does one mlg water down a cliff? :PGood story thou, keep it up :3
Zaayk November 11, 2014 at 12:11 PM UTC
How does one mlg water down a cliff? :P
Good story thou, keep it up :3
cinammoncroc000 November 11, 2014 at 4:11 PM UTC
Cliffhanger *o*Just a question, how many episodes will you release before you have to write more?
Storm997 November 11, 2014 at 10:11 PM UTC
Good to know :P I may or may not be using that information for something... *cough*Zaayk November 12, 2014 at 1:11 AM UTC
Season finale hype time! Super extremely long action packed Howsie vs Ivy fights and lots of suspense and lots of amazement!Are you ready? Go read Episode 10! :D
Season 2 should arrive within a week ;)
Thanks to everyone that reads this, you're awesome ;D
Phobiaxx November 12, 2014 at 1:11 AM UTC
Great story! ^-^ I feel inspired to make a similar series, if you're fine with that :PZaayk November 12, 2014 at 1:11 AM UTC
Great story! ^-^ I feel inspired to make a similar series, if you're fine with that :P
Phobiaxx November 12, 2014 at 2:11 AM UTC
Yeah, sure, as long as it isn't an exact replica :P
Zaayk November 12, 2014 at 12:11 PM UTC
Thanks ^-^ Made it, yours is a lot better xD
Storm997 November 12, 2014 at 10:11 PM UTC
I'll probably get lazy and never finish it, but...http://gyazo.com/8df58a4819e818c27de26f199f48b180
Animation in the works...
Zaayk November 13, 2014 at 2:11 AM UTC
I'll probably get lazy and never finish it, but...
http://gyazo.com/8df58a4819e818c27de26f199f48b180
Animation in the works...
Would it be ok if I worked with you on it, like give you a better, deeper understanding of what it looks like?
Zaayk November 13, 2014 at 11:11 AM UTC
Season 2 is officially released! :DStorm997 November 13, 2014 at 11:11 PM UTC
Your story man, I wouldn't object to you helping out. But I warn you, I'm not the most committed of people. I don't know how long ill still be inspired to make dis. Thanks for the reply thou, I will try my best :3 Do you want to let me know your skype name? I'll add you whenever I see it, and we can be in business and suchStorm997 November 15, 2014 at 3:11 PM UTC
Part one of part one is done! xP Now comes the hard part... making the actual map. Probably gonna want your input on this, zach.NewVoltdrive November 15, 2014 at 4:11 PM UTC
Oh, an edited version of the original Excalibur Saga. The changes are cool.But, Excalibur Saga wasn't the first fanfic. The Puppetmaster was. <3
Zaayk January 18, 2015 at 2:01 PM UTC
Ok, due to me being back, The Excalibur Saga is back! Enjoy the new episode, and more are coming soon. :DAtditC January 18, 2015 at 5:01 PM UTC
Ok, due to me being back, The Excalibur Saga is back! Enjoy the new episode, and more are coming soon. :D
finally they're back
alexanderjoe January 18, 2015 at 5:01 PM UTC
Yey I made my show up. To save peoples lifes!EDIT: Also thanks for bringing this back I love reading them.