♠The Avicadian Gazette♠>ISSUE01 by Phobiaxx September 10, 2014 at 4:09 AM UTC
Hello there... this is the first issue of The Avicadian Gazette. It took quite awhile to make... due to technical difficulties. We are still looking for staff... check out the official thread.Well? Here it is!
http://www.scribd.com/doc/239363539/The-Avicadian-Gazette-Issue1?secret_password=Clo3tRw7IW65FIETexfj
Convenienty there... JUST FOR YOU TO READ! :D
(only for you eager people ;p our developer will release the site shortly.)
What do you think? :D comment below! Answers to the word search will come in the next issue!
What's Inside this Issue:
FirstSintax September 10, 2014 at 4:09 AM UTC
Im not downloading anything, can you find another way of showing it?Phobiaxx September 10, 2014 at 4:09 AM UTC
"(only for you eager people ;p our developer will release the site shortly.)"hue
besides... html can't harm your computer ;p
toketrain September 10, 2014 at 4:09 AM UTC
cool, once it's complete there should be a link from the website to yours.Phobiaxx September 10, 2014 at 4:09 AM UTC
silly me.... so dumb... changed the download to a PDF.JKawesome September 10, 2014 at 5:09 AM UTC
Nice! Just read the entire thing. There are some grammar mistakes every once in a while thoughY0urm0m1 September 10, 2014 at 6:09 AM UTC
no pics, no clicks :cneed to see some pics at least D:
Emmaye September 10, 2014 at 8:09 AM UTC
Nice!11!I like this
Riskayyy September 10, 2014 at 8:09 AM UTC
Holy... That looks amazing! I love this, keep it up guys! =DStaticFaultz September 10, 2014 at 8:09 AM UTC
So, a few things:-When writing a newspaper article, I think it'd be best to use the inverted pyramid technique that is typically used; important stuff in the beginning, and gradually, less important info regarding the subject in the article at the end of it.
-You should probably use another program to make this. The layout of the text is pretty awkward and somewhat difficult to follow. Try a left-to-right format next time. I know you want to make it seem somewhat different with each page, but I think that it'd be best to stay consistent with the layout of the text.
-Stay unbiased when you write the article. You can use some vivid verbs/adjectives to emphasize the events that has been occurring around Avicus (like "horrible news was changed into incredible news"), but try to stay away from using it on touchy subjects like the EULA part. Some people support it in a way (like me), and some don't (like how you described it).
-Graphics. Graaaaaaphhhhiiiccccccccssssss. This isn't a priority to you since I know you're just starting this out and you're focusing on the writing department of this, but still;
-Roboto is a very sexy, readable font that can be a great alternative to the one you are using in the
-It's hard, but sacrifice going through the process of making an HTML post as it appears to be the thing that takes a lot of time when making this newspaper. Balance the quality and the quantity.
Good stuff though; it's nice to see some members of this community form together to create something cool.
OPTOBAT September 10, 2014 at 9:09 AM UTC
TheRomanTrident I'm still willing to be a writer for you? :(Arigenn September 10, 2014 at 1:09 PM UTC
Thanks for the feedback guys!Phobiaxx September 10, 2014 at 2:09 PM UTC
@all thanks! hopefully jake will be able to get the website up soon o-o@yourmom illz see
@static best feedback so far! :D thanks
Phobiaxx September 10, 2014 at 2:09 PM UTC
Nice! Just read the entire thing. There are some grammar mistakes every once in a while though
Glitchaye September 10, 2014 at 3:09 PM UTC
This looks incredible, The only complaint I have with it, Is that the images seem a little blurry. But overall, Great job.Notalgicular September 10, 2014 at 3:09 PM UTC
can you not just take a screenshot of this gazette thing and put it on imgurPhobiaxx September 10, 2014 at 11:09 PM UTC
UPDATED! No need for download now! :Dhttp://www.scribd.com/doc/239363539/The-Avicadian-Gazette-Issue1?secret_password=Clo3tRw7IW65FIETexf...
@notal doin it now
@glitchy I have no idea how to increase the PDF quality :c sadly
Phobiaxx September 10, 2014 at 11:09 PM UTC
Update:Added Imgur Pictures, for Notal's Request.Awarrior September 11, 2014 at 12:09 AM UTC
Sorry about the first articleSnowcone202 September 11, 2014 at 12:09 AM UTC
Sorry about the first article
Phobiaxx September 11, 2014 at 12:09 AM UTC
Sorry about the first article
did you retire already? o-o
_Phyre September 11, 2014 at 12:09 AM UTC
Me youtube! :(I will be inactive doe since my dad has my laptop ._.
Awarrior September 11, 2014 at 12:09 AM UTC
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did you retire already? o-o
