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NEW HORROR STORY SEPTEMPER 2014 OH YEAH! by Dawudis September 4, 2014 at 4:09 AM UTC

OH YEAH BOOOYYYY!!! THIS IS DEDICATED TO REMY!

Me, Myself, and I
  I stand facing something worse than fear. Actually it is fear. I can’t move, and all I can do is stare. I thought this would turn out good, but it just made it worse…   I am scared of the thing that stalks me at night. Everywhere, I look I see it. It’s always there, it’s like it is a part of me. I see it in my reflection on the window and mirror. It can be described as a crawling devil. It has the red eyes, and he walks on my walls. He’s just like me; I always wanted to walk on the walls when I saw those action movies. Oh well, a child’s dream doesn’t last.  Then the nails, they are sharp and long. He’s just like me; I used to have long nails when I was a kid. I liked them sharp, but now they are short.   I realized he knew all my secrets, like the most embarrassing moment in my life. And the first lie I ever told. He would always tell me it, and remind me of how bad it was.   There is something that scares me even more. I have a secret that we both must hide. The “thing” killed my mother. She died when I was 12 years old. I saw its big smile, as it stabbed my mother’s face.  However, instead of telling anybody or the police… I kept it a secret. There was something that told me not to tell anyone.   The exact same thing happened to my father, but I still kept it a secret. I couldn’t tell anybody. No one could know. I have been living in the same house with the bodies buried in the backyard.   So I have been going through 8 years of this madness. It stalks me, it annoys me. I have kept it for so long here, and now… I am going to get rid of it. Night falls and I fall with it. I am fast asleep, my eyes filled with darkness. It feels like forever until I awake in an endless hallway oblivious to my surrounding. I walk through the hallway, and find doors. I open some of them, and find my memories. Some of them are bad and some of them are good. I walk for what seemed like years going through doors of memories, until I reach the present.  I walk ahead and only see pitch black.   That’s when I hear a stomping sound. I quickly look behind, and see the “thing” crawling faster than ever. I wasn’t afraid though. I ran to the beast and swung my fist at its cold blooded face. It squealed and took a large knockback. I see it on the ground about to take a jump. And oh boy, it sure took a jump. It jumped 50 feet in the air, and landed its entire body on mine. I cough out blood, and then punched it in the face again. My rage made me punch it multiple times as the chunks of its cheek fell off. It made another disgusting squeal, and fell back. It ran away, but I chased it. I kept running and running till it actually stopped. I give it a kick in the stomach. When it fell onto the ground, I stepped on its face, and tried crushing it. Then it was barely alive. I prepared my foot to step on its face one last time.   Before I could get the last hit, I woke up in my bathroom. I was in shock cleaning myself up. I walk over to get my towel, till I look in my mirror. I couldn’t move though, the sight was too shocking. My reflection wasn’t me; it was the monster standing right there.

Hopefully, you guys enjoyed this!

JKawesome September 4, 2014 at 4:09 AM UTC

This is actually one of the better horror stories I've seen. It actually got me scared for a moment lol. The first few lines remind me of what BALLZI said he would do to me last night .-.

OPTOBAT September 4, 2014 at 8:09 AM UTC

terrific effort and plot, 
never going near a mirror ever again after sunset :/

Dawudis September 4, 2014 at 9:09 PM UTC

ikr bro's! This took me a long time to think and write! Glad you like :D

Porkyyy September 4, 2014 at 9:09 PM UTC

Very nice and well planned out!

Dawudis September 4, 2014 at 9:09 PM UTC

Very nice and well planned out!
Thanks dude, glad you liked it!

alexanderjoe September 4, 2014 at 9:09 PM UTC

If you ever make a story. YOU HAVE TO TELL US! You are so good and I just have blah like 1 paragraph stories :P

Dawudis September 5, 2014 at 12:09 AM UTC

If you ever make a story. YOU HAVE TO TELL US! You are so good and I just have blah like 1 paragraph stories :P
Thanks for the support dood! Actually I am doing exactly as you say. Every time I make a horror story I alert everyone on teamspeak and on minecraft! 

But still thanks Alex :D

ParthDarthVader September 5, 2014 at 1:09 AM UTC

Moremoremoremoremoremoremore

Dawudis September 6, 2014 at 8:09 PM UTC

It will Come!!!!

Infivix September 6, 2014 at 8:09 PM UTC

You're the master of horror stories. :D